MY ADVENTURE IN ORLANDO
( capitalization rules)
Once I was in Orlando Florida and we went to this great steak house call Fogo di chao , we ate these delicious pichana and faldina which where DELICIUUUS. At the next day we went to Universal studios and Island of adventures I wanted to go to these big roller coaster call Hulk but I coudent because I was to little to go on it so I got sad, but then I so this roller coaster called Woody wood pecker roller coaster and I did the line and there was this guy on the entrance and measure me and I also was to little. But he told me that keep the secret and enter he was really nice with me so I gave him a hug and it was most of the coolest roller coaster in the world.
Then we went to Island of adventure and I wanted to enter to this magician show and we enter and I was on the fron line, it was really cool because he did this light trick and he use it with me. He enter a ligh into my ear and take it from the other I really like it so I tell mi dad if he could buy the kit and he bought it and I loved it and I play with it a lot in the hotel . But before I was in the hotel we went to a walk and there was this super nice store and I so these cool collar of a purple pearl with a monster hand on top and I bought it and I never took it of. Until it got lost.
THE END😎
( capitalization rules)
Once I was in Orlando Florida and we went to this great steak house call Fogo di chao , we ate these delicious pichana and faldina which where DELICIUUUS. At the next day we went to Universal studios and Island of adventures I wanted to go to these big roller coaster call Hulk but I coudent because I was to little to go on it so I got sad, but then I so this roller coaster called Woody wood pecker roller coaster and I did the line and there was this guy on the entrance and measure me and I also was to little. But he told me that keep the secret and enter he was really nice with me so I gave him a hug and it was most of the coolest roller coaster in the world.
Then we went to Island of adventure and I wanted to enter to this magician show and we enter and I was on the fron line, it was really cool because he did this light trick and he use it with me. He enter a ligh into my ear and take it from the other I really like it so I tell mi dad if he could buy the kit and he bought it and I loved it and I play with it a lot in the hotel . But before I was in the hotel we went to a walk and there was this super nice store and I so these cool collar of a purple pearl with a monster hand on top and I bought it and I never took it of. Until it got lost.
THE END😎
luna
(Lesson common nouns and proper nouns)
On 2008 at June 27 was my birthday and my parents gave me a dog that I decided to call Luna in this moment she is 7 years old. She is a toy Yorkshire and she is the nicest dog in the world " with me " she sleeps with me and protects me went she thinks there is something wrong going on. When they gave me her I remember that I was on United States with my family but my father came back before to get her on the airport, the next day I arrived and I saw her she was the cuties little puppy in the world she fit on a little toy bag. 2 years latter we went to Bogota to visit my uncle and in its apartment they accepted dogs so I took her and I fell going down the bus with her gladly nothing happen, We had awesome mini vacations.
Years pass and she grew up now she is 7 years old and a old little cute dog, she only sleeps and see tv" YES I SAY TV". She sleep with me at night and she snores really loud and sometimes is hard to sleep, but I love her so it doesn't matter me. I will love her until death she has been my first pet and she is gonna be my first pet I love how she protects the people who she care from, and I think that where ever she is or gonna be great how she is.
I ❤️ U
On 2008 at June 27 was my birthday and my parents gave me a dog that I decided to call Luna in this moment she is 7 years old. She is a toy Yorkshire and she is the nicest dog in the world " with me " she sleeps with me and protects me went she thinks there is something wrong going on. When they gave me her I remember that I was on United States with my family but my father came back before to get her on the airport, the next day I arrived and I saw her she was the cuties little puppy in the world she fit on a little toy bag. 2 years latter we went to Bogota to visit my uncle and in its apartment they accepted dogs so I took her and I fell going down the bus with her gladly nothing happen, We had awesome mini vacations.
Years pass and she grew up now she is 7 years old and a old little cute dog, she only sleeps and see tv" YES I SAY TV". She sleep with me at night and she snores really loud and sometimes is hard to sleep, but I love her so it doesn't matter me. I will love her until death she has been my first pet and she is gonna be my first pet I love how she protects the people who she care from, and I think that where ever she is or gonna be great how she is.
I ❤️ U
sleep
(commas)
On Saturday I went to alice house we see movies, cook, play in the pool, etc. She has this beautiful dog call Lorenzo he loves to play, go out, wake, run he just love having fun, Lorenzo is alice first own dog it is a chihuahua color brown and i loveeee him. I was her first friend to met him so he already knows me and he loves playing with me and her, well now lets stop talking of things now I am gonna be talking you about what happen. On Saturday I went to Alice house to sleep we had a lot of fun because we run, we played, we laugh and we had a lot of fun as we ALWAYS do. At night like at 12 it was all dark and I was sleeping in the floor and she in her bed, and we only see shadows and she gave me a big scare because she stand in my back and like a monster so it almost gave me a heart attack.
On Sunday we went to El Campestre she was having a golf evaluation, so I was for 1 hour and 30 minutes waiting for her, but gladly I so Checa and I play with her until Naty came at 11:30 ,and I went to see alice and she was all ready done so I threw her a water ballon and it was really fun to see her expression wen I threw her the ballon. I help her to get the golf basket back and then she change into the swimming suit we get into the pool and make water balloons, we threw us water, jump in top of the other.
THE END
On Saturday I went to alice house we see movies, cook, play in the pool, etc. She has this beautiful dog call Lorenzo he loves to play, go out, wake, run he just love having fun, Lorenzo is alice first own dog it is a chihuahua color brown and i loveeee him. I was her first friend to met him so he already knows me and he loves playing with me and her, well now lets stop talking of things now I am gonna be talking you about what happen. On Saturday I went to Alice house to sleep we had a lot of fun because we run, we played, we laugh and we had a lot of fun as we ALWAYS do. At night like at 12 it was all dark and I was sleeping in the floor and she in her bed, and we only see shadows and she gave me a big scare because she stand in my back and like a monster so it almost gave me a heart attack.
On Sunday we went to El Campestre she was having a golf evaluation, so I was for 1 hour and 30 minutes waiting for her, but gladly I so Checa and I play with her until Naty came at 11:30 ,and I went to see alice and she was all ready done so I threw her a water ballon and it was really fun to see her expression wen I threw her the ballon. I help her to get the golf basket back and then she change into the swimming suit we get into the pool and make water balloons, we threw us water, jump in top of the other.
THE END
Farm
common adjectives
On Thursday I went to my farm I had a lot of fun because on Saturday Alic went and it was so cool, we toke like 500 pictures which she didn't know how to take but I took really good pictures of her. Which she has of profile in whatsapp we took the idea from Pinterest, we also make like 50 Nutella ice cream that stay delicious my brother invited a friend two so we had a LOOOOOOOOOOOOT of fun we ate the ice creams in less than 30 minutes they where so DELICIUUUS that we even had to make more and also got done in less than 30 minutes.
On Saturday was an awesome day because it was a lot of fun because I also got my dog to the pool for her to refresh and at the end she looked like a rat but I steel love her.on Sunday we had a walk to see our neighbors pet and they where 2 donkeys they told us that they bought them 3 years ago because on a trip they sow them really thick so they bought them and they treat them like dogs. It is really funny because they take them out with necklace like dogs, that day was awful because it rain a lot but we got on the pool and have some fun.
THE END
On Thursday I went to my farm I had a lot of fun because on Saturday Alic went and it was so cool, we toke like 500 pictures which she didn't know how to take but I took really good pictures of her. Which she has of profile in whatsapp we took the idea from Pinterest, we also make like 50 Nutella ice cream that stay delicious my brother invited a friend two so we had a LOOOOOOOOOOOOT of fun we ate the ice creams in less than 30 minutes they where so DELICIUUUS that we even had to make more and also got done in less than 30 minutes.
On Saturday was an awesome day because it was a lot of fun because I also got my dog to the pool for her to refresh and at the end she looked like a rat but I steel love her.on Sunday we had a walk to see our neighbors pet and they where 2 donkeys they told us that they bought them 3 years ago because on a trip they sow them really thick so they bought them and they treat them like dogs. It is really funny because they take them out with necklace like dogs, that day was awful because it rain a lot but we got on the pool and have some fun.
THE END
Juan jose
(Commas between 2 adjectives)
2 years ago my baby brother was born, I remember I was in 5th grade and my dad called me. He told me, your brother is born and he send me a picture he was and is the cutest thing in the world, he loves playing and doing everything he can, he loves everyone but sometimes he is the most awful person but I still live him.
These Friday, February 26,2016 he is going to be 2 years old I am really proud of him because he learns really fast and know he is going to have friends go to party's and he is not going to be anymore the cute little baby I used to see.
I will, missed a lot seeing hem learning to walk, learning how to talk and how cute and also me he was but I know the in the future he will be that cute guy that will always in his life be more than awesome. He is going to be amassing, helpful and full of joy, and he will bring happiness to everyone he sees, I love him and I will never in my intire life will stop loving him.
I 💗 YOU BROTHER
2 years ago my baby brother was born, I remember I was in 5th grade and my dad called me. He told me, your brother is born and he send me a picture he was and is the cutest thing in the world, he loves playing and doing everything he can, he loves everyone but sometimes he is the most awful person but I still live him.
These Friday, February 26,2016 he is going to be 2 years old I am really proud of him because he learns really fast and know he is going to have friends go to party's and he is not going to be anymore the cute little baby I used to see.
I will, missed a lot seeing hem learning to walk, learning how to talk and how cute and also me he was but I know the in the future he will be that cute guy that will always in his life be more than awesome. He is going to be amassing, helpful and full of joy, and he will bring happiness to everyone he sees, I love him and I will never in my intire life will stop loving him.
I 💗 YOU BROTHER
my family
my room
(prepositional phrases)
Hey today I will be talking about my room, so first I have my (bed under my bed) I store craft things in large boxes. Then I have my closet they are two of (them and in the top) they have a large area were I store bags and shoes and in the other one I store backpacks, clothe and in the (top old family albums) then at the (side of mi closet) there is the door and (next the door) there are some drawers that are not together. First I have 2 that are in (top of each other) then (down of them) there is a large floor drawer and on (top they are 2 drawers) that are (next to each other).
Then (next to the drawers) there is the windows and then I have my craft area were I have a table some duct tape and some gavinets. (Next to the gavinets) I have some large boxes were I have toys that I never use and then we are back to my bed that is my room it is not that big but form me is perfect.
Hey today I will be talking about my room, so first I have my (bed under my bed) I store craft things in large boxes. Then I have my closet they are two of (them and in the top) they have a large area were I store bags and shoes and in the other one I store backpacks, clothe and in the (top old family albums) then at the (side of mi closet) there is the door and (next the door) there are some drawers that are not together. First I have 2 that are in (top of each other) then (down of them) there is a large floor drawer and on (top they are 2 drawers) that are (next to each other).
Then (next to the drawers) there is the windows and then I have my craft area were I have a table some duct tape and some gavinets. (Next to the gavinets) I have some large boxes were I have toys that I never use and then we are back to my bed that is my room it is not that big but form me is perfect.
AlIC
(Complex sentences, simple and compounds)
Alic is my best friend although she is crazyyyyy but I steel love her, we had a loooooot of funny moments and sad moments wich are aufull but then we resolve the problem. She goes to my house and I go to her and although our houses have a looooooooot of difference but we resolve the differences we have a loooot of fun in each other houses she has a puppy and I have a old dog that I love a lot and there is a blog of her call LUNA, I'm gonna tell you how we have a lot of fun. We have a lot of fun because we do whatever we could and we make an aufull made but we clean it, we dance in sock, we sing karaoke, we see movies, we cook, we laugh a looooooooot we just do whatever we can.
Although we have a little bit of difference we don't make it notice and thrust me she is the best friend you would wish, but she is my bes friend not yours jajajajajaja. Sorry for that but she is. We have a lot of fun not only in each other house but in school we laugh we heat but at the end we jus have the best day with each other and she is just the best and I can't tell you how.
LOL😋
Alic is my best friend although she is crazyyyyy but I steel love her, we had a loooooot of funny moments and sad moments wich are aufull but then we resolve the problem. She goes to my house and I go to her and although our houses have a looooooooot of difference but we resolve the differences we have a loooot of fun in each other houses she has a puppy and I have a old dog that I love a lot and there is a blog of her call LUNA, I'm gonna tell you how we have a lot of fun. We have a lot of fun because we do whatever we could and we make an aufull made but we clean it, we dance in sock, we sing karaoke, we see movies, we cook, we laugh a looooooooot we just do whatever we can.
Although we have a little bit of difference we don't make it notice and thrust me she is the best friend you would wish, but she is my bes friend not yours jajajajajaja. Sorry for that but she is. We have a lot of fun not only in each other house but in school we laugh we heat but at the end we jus have the best day with each other and she is just the best and I can't tell you how.
LOL😋
Lucas
( preposition)
Lucas is a dog we found in the street of our farm and we have him for 1 week but resently we relive a call from his owner and I got really sad because I had good moments with him and they came to pick him up today and I cried a lot but a good thing is that he is with his owner and I can visit him because he lives up my farm so it is really good news for me. I remember on Saturday I was in my farm talking with my friend Alic by face time and my grandma comes with him in her arms and I'm like what and I remember holding him up and playing outside with him. I also remember he was really hungry and I take this big dog can of food and putting on a bowl for him to eat and he ate it all up in like 5 minutes.
I remember we had this old ties so I make him a necklace and he loved it then a lace I tied up some ties and he loved it to, in the moment he was staying with my grandma and he get to cry when we make him enter to the house but wen he goes outside he gets better. But yesterday he cried a lot so my grandma had to sleep with him because it didn't let my grandpa sleep but he stop crying, we had a lot of fun I will MISSE him a LOOOT.
Lucas is a dog we found in the street of our farm and we have him for 1 week but resently we relive a call from his owner and I got really sad because I had good moments with him and they came to pick him up today and I cried a lot but a good thing is that he is with his owner and I can visit him because he lives up my farm so it is really good news for me. I remember on Saturday I was in my farm talking with my friend Alic by face time and my grandma comes with him in her arms and I'm like what and I remember holding him up and playing outside with him. I also remember he was really hungry and I take this big dog can of food and putting on a bowl for him to eat and he ate it all up in like 5 minutes.
I remember we had this old ties so I make him a necklace and he loved it then a lace I tied up some ties and he loved it to, in the moment he was staying with my grandma and he get to cry when we make him enter to the house but wen he goes outside he gets better. But yesterday he cried a lot so my grandma had to sleep with him because it didn't let my grandpa sleep but he stop crying, we had a lot of fun I will MISSE him a LOOOT.
Indepentend reading
This 3rd quarter I read After a book by Anna Todd wich I enjoy reading it a LOOT ( I read the first book) I read it in my farm in my home and even seeing tv wich I don't know how was it possible but it happen this book treats about a girl call Theresa and a boy call Hardin wich are completely opposite people but at the end they finish loving each other. Thessa is how they call Theresa so she studied in WCU, her roomade is call steph and by a college party was where she meet Hardin so they never get good but he is best friend of steph so they talk to meet and Hardin pass for Tessa to university to go to a camp where it was beautiful and they had a lot of fun and there was there first kiss and it was so romantic. Ok the end of the story I think this book is great and if you love misery and passion you really have to read it it is jus THE BEEEEEST.
READ IIIIIIIT!!!!
READ IIIIIIIT!!!!
indepeNdent reading bloG
this is quarter 4 and For my independent reading I read paper towns wich was a really cool book, I will suggest it to people that like mystery and romance, this book treats about Margo Eoth Spiegeleisen man wen she was 9 years old she was playing with Quentin Jacobson and they found a dead body. Since that they they haven't go outside and it has pass 9 years and they are 18 now. Once in the middle of the night Margo went to Quentin house and told him that she wanted to have an adventure to find out what happen to the man that killed him self.
The next day she went missing and Quentin wanted to find her so he went to his frien Radar and Ben she left clues for them to find her, so he was a long time trying to find her. But wen he realized he didn't actually knew her he would stop trying to find her, so he stop and let her go:(.
The next day she went missing and Quentin wanted to find her so he went to his frien Radar and Ben she left clues for them to find her, so he was a long time trying to find her. But wen he realized he didn't actually knew her he would stop trying to find her, so he stop and let her go:(.